When we were friends
we were close
closer than ever
but when we became
a little more special
we lost the one thing
that brought us together
the friendship we had
it had died.
As friends we had started
but as lovers departed
and though our hearts did bleed
the words that i dare repeat
broke a relationship.
That could never be mended
a friendship that had ended.
Jael
Nice.........I like the way you think and write. You have an extraordinary talent of choosing and placing the right words at the right place. Impressed!!!!!!
ReplyDelete...a certain articulateness, a certain insight into words, language, the sound of words, the symmetry and the poetry of language. It is a totally different thing. It is not a question of linguistics or grammar, it is more a question of finding in ordinary language some extraordinary music, of creating the quality of great poetry in ordinary prose. U seem to know how to play with words... but the content is very mundane & ordinary...not aware of its true depth..
ReplyDeleteHmmm... very true JAEL...
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